The man who was humming to him self walked down the middle of the road
The man who beckoned me to join him walked down the middle of the road
The man whose suit was itching against his skin beckoned to join me
Dystopian relative clauses
The flash white car dazzled everyone. The prison guard who stood outside with his masculine dog kept watch. The prisoners shouted and screamed behind the iron bars of his cell. The chimneys which spluttered out smoke polluted the air.
November 12, 2012 at 11:05 am
Hi Kamran.
I am impressed with the speed of your understanding of relative clauses. You’ve done well here to construct complex sentences that include these.
The only thing that is needed now is commas. There should be a comma before and after the relative clause to show your reader where the sentence is developed.
An example of this is:
“The, prison guard who stood outside with his masculine dog, kept watch.”
– Can you go back to your sentences and add these?
Righto! Mr Waugh