Month: November 2012

“ww3 the worst fight of my life” The oil spitting mechanical ravens swooped and squawked at the helpless soldiers, and played with them like toys. Tall skyscrapers  were clouded by  the burning wood. The empty rusty train pulled into his last stop the fear on its face. The livid and evil monsters lurked under the water planning their attack. Families hiding in their basements worrying about how they are going to survive this outrageous war. buildings burnt to shreds, the crackle of the fire silenced the city, was it over?

“BOOM”  a bomb went off everyone was startled. I wondered who would do such a thing. Then it came to me it must have been Dr doom the evilest citizen of  bat city “BOOM” another one went off. Suprisingly the bombs were about 10 minutes between each other. The only problem is his lair was on the other side of the town, I’ve got to stop this i thought

instantly I ran in and out of alleyways ducked under poles I ran and jumped until I reached dr dooms EVIL lair. From the outside it looked like an innocent grandmas sweet shop bit in fact on he other side of the door an evil wrinkly old man who planned his evil schemes.

The ecology of the world would  collapse unless the citizens read the warning signs.

The ecology of the world wouldn’t collapse without the thames drying out.

Until the citizen noticed the warning signs the ecology of world would collapse.

It was a cold bright day in April. The clocks were striking thirteen. Winston Smith’s chin nuzzled into to his breast.Winston Smith made an effort to escape the vile wind. He slipped through the glass door of Victory Mansions.he was not quick enough to prevent a swirl off gritty dust Entering with him

The man who was humming to him self  walked down the middle of the road 

The man who beckoned me to join him walked down the middle of the road

The man whose suit was itching against his skin beckoned to join me

Dystopian relative clauses

The flash white car dazzled everyone. The prison guard who stood outside with his masculine dog kept watch. The prisoners shouted and screamed behind the iron bars of his cell. The chimneys which spluttered out smoke polluted the air.

Thank you Mr Waugh for taking your time to make us our blogs I hope we have loads more fun english lesson in the long run.

kamran alam